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KGaara/Yuki ([personal profile] kawaii_gaara) wrote2011-04-11 09:20 pm
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Day 10 and 11 poetry!

As a little up lifter to counteract the one from yesterday, lol. Both in Tanka form.

春雨と
落ち込む度に
胸痛み
只管願う
友への想い

Harusameto
Ochikomu tabi ni
Mune itami
Hitasura negau
Tomo e no omoi

With the spring rain
Every time one feels down
This heart hurts
Earnestly wishing
Sentiments to a friend

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Feel the warm spring breeze.
Lift thy head high to the sun
and stand proud, my friend.
For thy great achievements paint
a picture to your true worth.

[identity profile] kimi-kuma.livejournal.com 2011-04-13 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
When you make your poems, does it come to your mind first in Japanese or English, or both?

[identity profile] ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
And up lifting they are. Never forget that you can always reflect back on your own words when you need encouragement, you're a wonderful writer.

[identity profile] ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com 2011-07-14 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
I've already said you never have to apologize for any delay, after all your the only one to comment on most everything anyways. ^_^ So I think I can afford to allow you whatever time you need. lol