Day 5 of poetry~

[kawaii_gaara]

First is Tanka 5-7-5-7-7:

雛菊を
部屋に飾りし
見詰めなり
笑顔齎らす
心の清め

Hinagiku wo
Heyani kazarishi
Mitsumenari
Egao motarasu
Kokoro no kiyome

The daisy
Decorate thy room with
And gaze upon it.
It shall bring smiles
and cleanse thy soul.

And this is one I created a few days ago but forgot to share when I was thinking of Japan.

大波で
景色消えさり　
鶴も鳴く

Oonami de
Keshiki kiesari
Tsuru mo naku

With the big wave
Scenery/landscape vanishing
Even the crane cries.

Comments

[ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com]

Daisies, beautiful,
much like the words written here
that adorn the heart.

[kawaii_gaara]

AWWWW <333333333 I am not worthy Shisho!! /bows down

[torrens-v-casus.livejournal.com]

Give yourself more credit, you're a wonderful writer.

[kawaii_gaara]

Thank you so much! <3333