Day 4 of poetry~

[kawaii_gaara]

哀れみに
時に蝶も散る
学べし

Awaremi ni
Toki ni cho mo chiru
Manabubeshi

For pity
At times even the butterfly will fall
One must learn

死者話
春れてる朝も
寒くなる

Shisha banashi
Hareteru asa mo
Samukunaru

Talk of the dead
Even the sunny morning
Becomes cold

Yeah... today's lesson in class was on death and dying =TTWTT=;;; so this is what I came up with to reflect the kind of day I had. Though honestly, today was a really good day overall with a 89 on my exam~<3 /o/

Comments

[ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com]

Sounds like it would have been something to stick with you. It's good to hear about the 89 though, well done.

Again both of these are well composed and moving. You have an excellent way of creating a tone despite the briefity of the form.

[kawaii_gaara]

Kyaaa~<33 Compliments from Shisho~ =>W<= <3333 I feel honored! Thank you so much!

[ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com]

-hugs- Thank you for everything that you do.

[kawaii_gaara]

Everything I dooo =owo=;;;? Awwwww~ that's going a bit far~ Shisho~ XDDDDD but thank youuu~<3333

[sandathea.livejournal.com]

You should share these with Ali, she'd love them! I just love your haikus!

[kawaii_gaara]

Oh yeah? Awwww I really do need to get in touch with her again =; ;=!!! Thank youuu~ I'm glad you like them! <3333