Bonus Day 4 haiku

[kawaii_gaara]

On this warm spring night
Allowing a single tear
I lay down my mask

Reaching and spreading my wings
I yearn for the warm spring air
To grant me freedom

Comments

[sandathea.livejournal.com]

Wow... you inspired me!

Sweet sad Orpheus,
Looking back at your lost love,
Was she ever there?

[ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com]

An excellent pair of haiku that work well individually as well as coupled. Honestly I think this is a pretty close expression of the way that I've felt the last few days; amazing done love.