"Kaa~san"

Oooh, these were both really good! <3 Aion/Fiore is still a little bit creepy to me, but the reasoning behind the scene made sense. My only critique on it is I think the word "humane" isn't quite what you're looking for--that means something more along of compassion and sympathy for other people and animals. Fiore might have that, but it doesn't make much sense in the context it's in. I can't figure out a word that means exactly what you're looking for..."aware", maybe? Cognizant?
...Unless you just mean human, in which case I'm overanalyzing this. XD

And the Chrono/Aion one...T_T That was so sad! I like the idea of Aion and Chrono acknowledging their relationship a final time before Aion dies. And the contrast between Aion and Chrono, too--Aion going out with a smile while Chrono watches with tears in his eyes, for example. Aion's at peace with his choice, and Chrono still has nothing but questions. (But, ha, that's probably me putting my own feelings about the characters and story onto the piece.)

My main critique with that one is that it's a little hard to tell who's being talked about. For example: He slowly closed the remaining gap between them as his left hand took a hold of his right. Aion's left hand, right? Is he holding his own hand, or Chrono's? (I know logically it's Chrono, but it's not clear from this sentence.) Don't be afraid to use their names a little more often to make it clearer!