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KGaara/Yuki ([personal profile] kawaii_gaara) wrote2009-04-21 11:51 pm

Trying to be creative;;;;

Heeeeeeeeeey;;; Soo yea, I saw this drabble meme on the Chrno Crusade comm and decided to give it a shot. With much help from Loke~ I managed to come up with something so I figured I'd share it with you guys~<3 This is my first time writing a drabble soo p-please be gentle~ -TTWTT-;;; OTL

But nonetheless, hope you like it~<3


[Spoiler Warning]

Title: Last Breath
Fandom: Chrno Crusade
Characters: Lilith and Aion
Word Count: 119
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these beautiful characters~ -TTWTT-;;;


She wearily gazed down at her enemy, perspiration seeping out of her thick skin. For how long has she seen things through those eyes and had no say? The poor man was full of rage and yet she heard deep inside his concerns and assuring words to her; feelings separate from those he passionately expressed towards her outward appearance.

The sharp end of the blade piercing through her with much caution, she couldn't help but pull her lips up into a small smile. His face so close to hers; the warmth of his body; how much he’d grown. Too long had she waited for this moment. She whispered sweet graces beside his long ear before taking her last breath.

[identity profile] haleysings.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
...I didn't think anyone could make that scene seem as sweet as you just did. That's excellent, particularly for a first drabble!

[identity profile] haleysings.livejournal.com 2009-04-21 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, you mean the scene in the eight volume when Aion severs Lilith's head from Pandaemonium and "Frees" her, right? XD Almost thought it was TB!Lillith at first, until I recognized the scene...I'm right, right?

[identity profile] ladynathena.livejournal.com 2009-04-22 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
I know nothing about this series, but I like this piece, because it's so beautiful and bittersweet. Gaara-san, you do realize that I'll probably insist you write another drabble for a series I do know, yes? *pokes*

[identity profile] ladynathena.livejournal.com 2009-04-22 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
Well, you don't have to force yourself if you're not feeling inspired. I'll be willing to read anything you write, as long as it's a series I know. But, if you need a prompt, how about something Kakashi related, since you've been kind of depressed with things going on for him right now.

[identity profile] ladynathena.livejournal.com 2009-04-22 06:33 am (UTC)(link)
How about your own take on how he comes back to life? :)