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4/12/11:
春花の
香りに釣られ
独り占め

Harubana no
Kaori ni tsurare
Hitori jime

Lured by
the scent of spring flowers.
Monopolize.

短にも
楽しく過ごす
春休み
感謝の元に
友との時間

Mijikani mo
Tanoshiku sugosu
Haruyasumi
Kansha no moto ni
Tomo tono jikan

Though short,
fun times spent (on)
Spring break.
At the base of my appreciation,
lies the time with my friend.


4/13/11:
Furred ears flapping wild,
even the joyful canine
enjoys the spring breeze.


4/14/11:
時が過ぎ
引き続ける身
花園へ
疲れ重なり
自由を望む

Toki ga sugi
Hikitsuzukeru mi
Hanazono e
Tsukare kasanari
Jyuu wo nozomu

Time passing,
continuously dragging this body,
to the flower garden.
Fatigue overlapping.
Wishing for freedom.


4/15/11:

Pensee form:

Ones day.
Worn out and torn,
I lay this body to rest
On top of the airy white clouds.
To do it all again.

Date: Friday, April 22nd, 2011 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com
As always the Haiku and Tanka are wonderful, I especially like the one about the dog which made me laugh a moment. ^_^

As for the pensee, this is a magnificent job of following the form with both the syllable count and role of each line, not to mention a magnificent job with the tone.

Date: Thursday, July 14th, 2011 05:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com
^^; I'm always honored to hear the compliments that you leave for me, and honored that you would give poetry month a go so I wouldn't be on my own. So thank you~

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Thought of the moment

幸せは幸せを産む。
(Happiness brings happiness)

-Inoue Kazuhiko

行こうぜ。。自由な世界へ

-アイオーン (CC: Moriyama Daisuke)

If the only tool you have is a hammer, you tend to see every problem as a nail.

-Abraham Maslow

That you may retain your self-respect, it is better to displease the people by doing what you know is right, than to temporarily please them by doing what you know is wrong.

-William J.H. Boetcker

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