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I am.... actually really proud of this one~ XDDD;;; As corny as it may sound, I accomplished a fib form!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAY~! And used Emi's prompt with inanimate object~ =^W^= <3333 Hope you enjoy~<33

My Vow

Dear
young
master
so fragile
and innocent as
a lamb; the pure angel himself.
I exist here only to serve and be by your side.

To
warm,
comfort,
vanquish fear.
To create escape
by shielding you from the harsh world.
Since the day I was bought I have vowed to protect thee.

With
your
small hands
you hold on
to these frills of mine.
I catch your tears as you cry out.
Be your cape so you may soar the sky to fight evil.

Dear
young
master
Even as
you grow older now,
despite all of the mockery,
you trust and keep me at your side as you proudly walk.

I
hang
from thy
waist as you
go explore the world.
Refusing to throw me away.
Worn out and torn, still cherishing me as the first day.

Now
as
you bear
a little
princess of your own,
my vows stand as it had with you.
The promise to serve and be by her side at all times.

To
warm
comfort
Vanquish fear.
Till I no longer
hold a recognizable form,
my life will always be yours, dear young master of mine.

Date: Saturday, April 9th, 2011 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] othercat.livejournal.com
"fib form" ??

Date: Saturday, April 9th, 2011 03:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com
It's a form based off of the Fibonacci sequence; 1,1,2,3,5,8,13,. . . Where numbers in the sequence are the sum of the previous two. For the poem the syllable count for each line follows this pattern, being reset anytime that there is a stanza break.

For example:
Stanza One:
Line 01 | 1 syllable
Line 02 | 1 syllable
Line 03 | 2 syllables
Line 04 | 3 Syllables
Line 05 | 5 syllables
(and so on)

Stanza two: (reset)
Line 01 | 1 syllable

Date: Saturday, April 9th, 2011 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruo-fidelis.livejournal.com
A very nostalgic and comforting poem, much like the blanket that it encompasses. While sadly I didn't have anything like that, this is a very heart touching poem love, and you did an excellent job with the form and getting the lines to flow smoothly.

You should be proud of everything you write, but yes you should be especiallly proud of this one. I really loved it.

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幸せは幸せを産む。
(Happiness brings happiness)

-Inoue Kazuhiko

行こうぜ。。自由な世界へ

-アイオーン (CC: Moriyama Daisuke)

If the only tool you have is a hammer, you tend to see every problem as a nail.

-Abraham Maslow

That you may retain your self-respect, it is better to displease the people by doing what you know is right, than to temporarily please them by doing what you know is wrong.

-William J.H. Boetcker

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